Friday, July 30, 2010

Our Clown Writing




Clowns have colourful clothes. I like them because they make people laugh. Clowns juggle balls, balloons and much more. My clown’s name is Hannah. My clown can juggle. I love my clown because she takes care of me.
By Caitlin



A clown is really funny! Clowns have baggy, stripy clothes and big long shoes. They have big red noses that sound like a truck honking. A clown has got some flowers on his shirt, and he has got a pistol in his pocket, and when he asks the people to smell the flowers he squirts out water in their faces.

Clowns are super amazing characters! They look rainbow coloured. They make people laugh. Clowns juggle with colourful balls. They dance silly dances and walk and pretend to slip over! They can make animal balloons and they ride little mini cars. Clowns say funny things like ‘boo-hoo’. Clowns use funny voices. If I was a clown I would be called Suzie.

By Ella



Clowns have enormous noses. They are funny. They have colourful hair. They have face paint on them. Clowns have a flower and when people smell near the flower, it squirts at them.

All the time they juggle. Sometimes they juggle balls. They make a big difference because they try to make people laugh. If I was a clown my name would be Chino.

By Olly



Clowns are silly characters! They have baggy, colourful, bright clothes. Their noses are very big and red and they sound like a horn. They have a white background of face paint and they put stars and dots in different colours on their faces. I thought they looked funny.

The first time I saw a clown they looked scary. Clowns make people laugh! They do that by squirting people with a flower. Clowns can juggle balls and plates. If I was a clown my name would be Silly
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By Kate



Clowns are amazing characters. They have baggy clothes. My clown has two patches and my clown has a big fat tie. She sometimes says “Do I have odd socks on?” I say, “Of course you do because you are a clown.” Her hair is pink, purple, green and yellow. Their balloons can be any colour but my clown has a red balloon. My clown is 100 years old!

Once I saw nine clowns. Clowns make people laugh. They do silly things like squirt people with a flower. When I went to the bike ride, a clown squirted me and my Mum with a flower and my Mum wasn’t very impressed.

Guess what…Clowns juggle dice, fruit and plates! Clowns are really, really funny and sometimes clowns can be children. They have red noses and face paint. Their noses sound like a horn. If I was a clown my name would be Furny Wurny.

By Kyla



Clowns are funny. They paint their faces white to make his/her face pop up! There noses make horn sounds like…beep! Their pumps squirt water from flowers to scare people. They hide their pumps in their pockets.

Clowns give cards like Ronald McDonald. They are so silly they make people laugh. They make people laugh by driving tiny cars and saying people are tiny, and then they make them big again. They ride a unicycle and trip over. If I was a clown my name would be… Stinky Me!

By Irinej

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wow - what amazing clown writing! We love all the great describing words - we can really imagine your clowns in their funny clothes doing all those crazy things! What a great blog ... keep up all the fantastic work in R25.

Michelle, Craig and Haydn Butler

Room 21 said...

Thanks Michelle, Craig and Haydn for stopping by to comment on the wonderful clown writing and our blog. We look forward to your next visit!

MSanty said...

Wow - cool clown writing. 'Heal the World' - I love that song, keep up the practice. Hi Ella!!!
From Michlle Santy (Ella's Aunty)

Anonymous said...

Wonderful writing Ella - especially as I remember at Thomas's 1st birthday you were terrified of the clown who came to sing and dance for all the chidren.!!! I know you love them now and Grandma and Grandad are very proud of your fantastic clown story.

Anonymous said...

Well done Ella excellent story and we remember when you were so terrified of clowns when you were little but you now enjoy them as they do make us all laugh
Nana & Poppa

Anonymous said...

I think you writing is amzing. by nina.

Anonymous said...

I think you writing is amzing. by nina.